You’re my shadow
You follow me around
When it is sunny outside.
And I enjoy seeing you
Grow before me as I take every step.
You used to be little, when I was a little girl
Skipping down the sidewalk.
Then like a blink of the eye you were grown like me
And we walked down the street with the determination and
Confidences of a young women.
My shadow you have always been there and
I hope to continue, to enjoy taking walks with you.
As I become an old women and our walks become
Shorter I know when I look down I’m never alone
For you are always there my shadow, until the very end.
Written By: Deirdre Stokes
I enjoyed this but thought it was spoiled by the lack of attention to grammar/punctuation: your/you’re and its/it’s it is etc. I hope this is helpful, and again, nice write.
Thanks, help is always welcomed!
Hi, I found this but was thrilled that you soon made those changes. I cannot see a contact anywhere for you so put what I found here. If you ever need any help let me know.
Confident of a young women / Confidence of a young woman.
Okay
My email is deirdre23223@yahoo.com if you have anymore helpful tips for me. I always seem to miss out on grammar & punctuation errors in my writing.